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Sunday, February 03, 2008

Ok, so here it is. A love poem for my husband. I believe this will be the final draft. Unless I read it again in a few days and see something else that doesn't say it right. DANIEL! If you are reading this you MUST stop right now! I LOVE YOU! If anyone has any suggestions I am open! I pictured in my mind as I was writing this the first day I ever heard Daniel, saw him and so forth. Then it went into when we were married and such. Then the eternities. Kinda like a past, present and future thing. It didn't start out that way but at the very end was very obvious that's what it had to be. I felt myself as I was imagining my feelings in each state like I was floating down slowly in the ocean, an abyss. An abyss of love. Falling forever. Deeper and deeper in love. The water is Daniel, the way the water felt as it consumed every inch of me... you know? Slowly floating down into the abyss with every wonderful thing he does. Anyone is welcome to use it if they wish and feel it applies to their life. Just give credit to whom it goes... thanks. Hope you all have a great Valentines Day! Stay tuned around February 24th for my BIG project of 365 days of love notes for Daniel to read. I came up with more in case he had a bad day and need to read 2 one day. But I came up with 380 reasons I love Daniel. From little to big things. From memories to feelings. All about him. Positive and uplifting and loving reasons he is so wonderful and how I love him. I will take pictures of it completed with exactly what I did and post them with the list. I am very excited! It's going to take me forever to do it though! I hope I can finish it in 22 days!




Deep in the Abyss of love


I have fallen

I hear your voice, devoted

I see your eyes, untainted

I smell your skin, captivated

I feel your heart, committed

I taste your kiss, stimulated

I have fallen


I am Falling

Warm ambiance embracing

Delicate whispers professing

Pure sensations caressing

Wondrous beauty exploring

Rapture fully consuming

I am Falling


I will fall

Your exquisite love, a rarity

Your selfless gifts, in charity

A Higher strength, through Trinity

A boundless sealing, a verity

Deeper I fall in the abyss, for eternity

I will fall


Written by: Jannette Basham

Inspired by: Her loving husband Daniel

February 1, 2008

Happy Valentines Day!

1 Comments:

Karin said...

Wow, you're quite the poet, I'm impressed! Now, why you're composing at 4am is another issue... Our kids are slowly getting healthier, so hopefully we can play again soon!